Smith July 21, When I began writing my first crime novel, I knew it would be a challenge.
Happily, there are a few devices you can use to ensure you write the kind of fight scene that grips a reader from start to finish.
Let the reader choreograph your fight scene. This is their time to shine. Pace Intensifying the pace of your writing can communicate the immediacy and suddenness of conflict.
Short, simple sentences keep the reader on their toes. Fights happen quickly and your description needs to match that. In The Princess BrideWilliam Goldman writes a brilliant sword fightand perhaps the most enjoyable fight scene ever put on paper: The cliffs were very close behind him now.
Inigo continued to retreat; the man in black continued advancing. Then Inigo countered with the Thibault. And the man in black blocked it. Each sentence is short, the written equivalent of a sudden move. Every time a new person takes an action in this passage, Goldman starts a new line, making the reader encounter each attack as a sudden, vital event.
Hovering around the fight describing the actions of both characters sets a limitation on how gripping the experience can be. The key is to thrust the reader into the thick of the actionand to do that they need to experience the fight through a character. McDonald mimics this experience for the reader by having longer passages between the single sentences of violence: Instead of looking who had pushed him, Fletch tried to save himself from falling.
Someone pushed him again. He fell to the right, into the parade. A foot came up from the pavement and kicked him in the face.
You can also write to match the perspective of the attacker: Verbs not adverbs Fight scenes demand brevity and adverbs are the opposite. There are too many adverbs in your fight scene. There are a few exceptions. They embrace guttural simplicity to communicate that same quality in the action, but this trick only works once before you start sounding like a caveman.
What there is plenty of is sensory information. The taste of blood, the ringing in their ears, the ache of their injuries. Evan Hunter wrote fantastically brutal fight scenes by stating a simple, physical act and then following it up with evocative sensory information: He pulled him to his feet, almost tearing the collar… He heard the slight rasp of material ripping.
That description, from his short story collection Barking at Butterfliesadds more physicality to the encounter than any physical description could.
Use sensory information to make a fight scene relatable. Click To Tweet Sensory information is also more relatable to readers. Not everyone has been held up by the collar, but everyone has heard fabric tear and tasted their own blood after an accident.
You can summon incredibly detailed information through these minor descriptions: Just the results The opposite of writing a fight scene, but worth the occasional consideration, is to skip the violence entirely.Aug 17, · Best Action scenes in fiction Discussion in ' Book Discussion ' started by Thog, Aug 11, As per title, and yes I know this .
What do feel is the toughest part about writing an action scene? Leave me a comment below or contact me at lausannecongress2018.com Laurence MacNaughton writes funny books about magic crystals, possessed muscle cars, and the end of the world.
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Despite the title, Writing Fiction for Dummies is not for stupid people. It's for writers who want to write powerful, moving fiction and who are serious about getting their work published. Aug 24, · The fight scene should fulfill the promise of your book and feel like it fits seamlessly into the action of the previous chapters.
If you are writing a historical fiction novel, for example, the weapons and fighting styles of your characters should match the historical setting of the novel%(39).
Aug 22, · How to Begin Writing a Good Action Novel. The first few lines or hook of a book is especially important in action novels. A strong opening will introduce the action without overwhelming the reader with too much description, dialogue, or exposition. Write ten scenes%(38).
Action writing moves the reader along at a fast pace and uses a lot of active verbs with very little description. Learn how to use it in fiction. 5 Tips For Writing Action Scenes. Realistic Dialogue Writing Tips and Examples. How to Write Fiction from Third Person Limited Point of View.
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